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  • Solomon Hernandez

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    09.03.2022 at 11:55

    <font style=”vertical-align: inherit;”><font style=”vertical-align: inherit;”>Sorry for the mistake. This is for Vladislav! </font><font style=”vertical-align: inherit;”>I’d like to leave you some feedback on your Block 5 final project presentation:</font></font>

    <font style=”vertical-align: inherit;”><font style=”vertical-align: inherit;”>Structure:</font></font><font style=”vertical-align: inherit;”><font style=”vertical-align: inherit;”> Splendid work! </font></font><font style=”vertical-align: inherit;”><font style=”vertical-align: inherit;”>Your presentation was concise, easy to follow, and covered all the main points necessary. </font></font><font style=”vertical-align: inherit;”><font style=”vertical-align: inherit;”>(5)</font></font>

    <font style=”vertical-align: inherit;”><font style=”vertical-align: inherit;”>Visual presentation: Your presentation was fine. </font></font><font style=”vertical-align: inherit;”><font style=”vertical-align: inherit;”>It keywords contained. </font></font><font style=”vertical-align: inherit;”><font style=”vertical-align: inherit;”>I’d also like to commend how you were still speaking while the videos were being played. </font></font><font style=”vertical-align: inherit;”><font style=”vertical-align: inherit;”>(5)</font></font>

    <font style=”vertical-align: inherit;”><font style=”vertical-align: inherit;”>Fluency and vocabulary: You spoke at a natural pace without too many fillers. </font></font><font style=”vertical-align: inherit;”><font style=”vertical-align: inherit;”>You also did a good job using vocabulary related to predictions (eg “maybe”). </font></font><font style=”vertical-align: inherit;”><font style=”vertical-align: inherit;”>Unfortunately, you weren’t able to use vocabulary related to survival. </font></font><font style=”vertical-align: inherit;”><font style=”vertical-align: inherit;”>(4)</font></font>

    <font style=”vertical-align: inherit;”><font style=”vertical-align: inherit;”>Grammar: Nice work using the target grammar (eg “Politics will change”). </font></font><font style=”vertical-align: inherit;”><font style=”vertical-align: inherit;”>However, please be careful sometimes. </font></font><font style=”vertical-align: inherit;”><font style=”vertical-align: inherit;”>There were some mistakes like “Our lifestyle will be changed”, which should just be “Our lifestyle will change”. </font></font><font style=”vertical-align: inherit;”><font style=”vertical-align: inherit;”>Remember that if it’s an action verb, we don’t need “be”. </font></font><font style=”vertical-align: inherit;”><font style=”vertical-align: inherit;”>On another note, you used a nice transitional phrase, but instead of “in the conclusion”, it should be “in conclusion”. </font></font><font style=”vertical-align: inherit;”><font style=”vertical-align: inherit;”>(3)</font></font>

    <font style=”vertical-align: inherit;”><font style=”vertical-align: inherit;”>Great job overall! </font></font><font style=”vertical-align: inherit;”><font style=”vertical-align: inherit;”>Keep it up!</font></font>

    <font style=”vertical-align: inherit;”><font style=”vertical-align: inherit;”>Total (out of 20)</font></font><font style=”vertical-align: inherit;”><font style=”vertical-align: inherit;”> : 17</font></font>

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