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     Anna updated 6 months, 1 week ago 1 Member · 1 Post
  • Anna

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    31.03.2022 at 11:59

    Elena, thank you for completing the task!

    I like a lot of things about it:

    – you used a lot of adjectives that made the description very detailed: сalm, peaceful, believable, early morning, light fog, a fallen pine, etc

    – you used a lot of new words: cubs (I actually didn’t know this word! It’s a really nice one), first rays of the Sun, a dense forest

    – you used a lot of phrases to describe the picture: on the left, on the right, in the foreground, in the middle. We also usually say IN the background 🙂

    Some things I would do differently:

    – I’d use chunks like “The painting is created by …”

    – “..as if i myself are in the forest now.” Remember to check the verbs in writing: as if I AM in the forest

    Other than that, I think you did extremely well! Thank you so much!

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