Dear Maya! I’m so proud of you for stepping outside of your Modus operandi and completing the task! Thank you for opening up and telling me about your grandmother as you influence. I understand why she’s affected you so much and you’ve learned from her. I see where you got your calmness and patience from 🙂
It’s great that your level of English allows you to freely talk about such topics without hesitations. The only thing I would be careful with is the use of the past perfect forms: e.g. “She had inspired me a lot” can be just said using the the present perfect because there’s no indication as to when this happened. The most important thing here is the result (the inspiration), so using the past perfect is not necessary here, especially because there’s nothing else that happened after that.
Thank you for being such a diligent student, I think that these speaking exercises are going to be very useful for you in order practice the speed of speaking. See you in the evening!