Elena, thank you so much for this story, I listened to it two times because I was so impressed with your language! It was a pleasure to listen to you. You used the present simple (the photo shows) and continuous very well (I’m wearing), and you also the past (it was taken… a photographer took…) However, we would say “I have a bow” or “I’m wearing”, not “I’m having a bow”. Also, please check the pronunciation of “bow” 🙂 But this is the only mistake I’ve noticed. I like your use of adjectives as well (e.g. young and beautiful, important and dear). Super proud of you! Very well done!