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  • Solomon Hernandez

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    22.03.2022 at 19:41

    Great job writing your profile! The content was clear and organized. You did a good job sharing your experiences. When it comes to grammar, all of your sentences used the correct tenses. Keep that up! The only error I can point out is pretty minor. You wrote, “I explain well, I can listen carefully.” This is a run-on sentence. You should’ve written it as “I explain well and I can listen carefully.” or you also could’ve made it into two sentences, i.e. “I explain well. I can listen carefully.”

    That’s all for my feedback. Keep up the good work!

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