Thank you for completing your final project and presentation. And thank you sharing about the highs and sometimes challenging points of your life. It was inspiring to see overcame them and persevered.
I will grade your final project based on the following criteria:
Task completion – You were tasked with presenting and discussing two pivotal points in your life. One that was positive and one that was a challenge. Your presentation met the requirements of the task! Well done! [5/5]
Creative visual presentation – Your presentation was really nicely put together with easy to read text matched with great visual aids! Great work [5/5]
Grammar and Fluency – It was clear you had thought about how you wanted to deliver the content and it showed. Your delivery was measured and to the point. You achieved this by using great signposting language such as ‘I’ll spare you the details’ and ‘It’s time to talk’. You also included some of the past perfect tense structures we had been practicing! Well done! [5/5]
Vocab – It really important to use block vocab and you made attempt to do so; Significantly, Exhibit, Unforeseen circumstances, certainly. Great vocab. I, however, think we could have included more from the vocab we learnt from our watershed discussion. Either way, this was great! Well done! [4/5]