thank you very much for your work! The structure of your presentation was clear, you followed the plan. -5
The visual part of your presentation was great. Thank you for sharing your photos with us! – 5
You have used new and interesting words such as “pregnancy”, “responsive”, “appreciate”, etc.
Just do not forget to check pronunciation (receive [rɪ’siːv], appreciated [ə’priːʃɪeɪtɪd], etc.) – 4
As for grammar, you have mastered the “to be going to do” structure. However, I noticed that you made the same mistake mistake several times: was run, was start. We use to be verb when we want to describe someone or something. Otherwise, you say “я была начать”, “я была бегать”. Another point is that you missed some words (I’m going to English – to learn). – 3
You showed a good result, but do not forget to pay attention to grammar and pronunciation.