You took into account all the points listed in the assignment and your presentation was well structured. – 5
The visual part of your presentation was excellent! – 5
As for the use of vocabulary, I would like to point out a large number of terms that made your presentation very informative. – 5
From a grammatical point of view, I would like to note the excellent use of the Past Simple tense and Passive voice, however, there were some mistakes made ( e.g. in 21st May – ON, in the screen – ON, etc.). – 4
To sum it all up you did a great job! Your total score is 19/20.