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  • 8.3 Writing: Working In A Team

  • Solomon Hernandez

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    17.05.2022 at 22:07

    <font style=”vertical-align: inherit;”><font style=”vertical-align: inherit;”>A pretty good job on your essay! You were able to describe your previous experience in a mostly understandable way. However, please be careful with your grammar. In particular, there were quite a few cases where you used the simple present tense (e.g. “I ask other members”). Since you were talking about a past experience, you should’ve been using the past tense. Please be more mindful of the correct tenses. There was also one part that sounded a bit confusing. You wrote, “</font></font><font style=”vertical-align: inherit;”><font style=”vertical-align: inherit;”>so that we could talk the material to each </font></font><font style=”vertical-align: inherit;”><font style=”vertical-align: inherit;”>other again”. I think you meant to say something like “</font></font><font style=”vertical-align: inherit;”><font style=”vertical-align: inherit;”>so that we could talk to each </font></font><font style=”vertical-align: inherit;”><font style=”vertical-align: inherit;”>other about the material again”, so please take note of this.

    A solid job overall though!</font></font>

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