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  • Solomon Hernandez

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    17.05.2022 at 06:26

    <font style=”vertical-align: inherit;”><font style=”vertical-align: inherit;”>Hello Alexandra! </font><font style=”vertical-align: inherit;”>I’d like to leave you some feedback on your Block 8 final project presentation:
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    <font style=”vertical-align: inherit;”><font style=”vertical-align: inherit;”><font style=”vertical-align: inherit;”><font style=”vertical-align: inherit;”>Nice work on the presentation. </font><font style=”vertical-align: inherit;”>You were able to cover most of the points. </font><font style=”vertical-align: inherit;”>However, it would’ve been better to give an actual name for the community. </font><font style=”vertical-align: inherit;”>You also should’ve delved into how to actually join the community in the last part, instead of who can join the community. (4)</font></font>
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    <font style=”vertical-align: inherit;”><font style=”vertical-align: inherit;”><font style=”vertical-align: inherit;”><font style=”vertical-align: inherit;”><font style=”vertical-align: inherit;”><font style=”vertical-align: inherit;”>I like your presentation overall. </font><font style=”vertical-align: inherit;”>It was cute, simple, and used relevant photos and text. </font><font style=”vertical-align: inherit;”>You could’ve added a bit more keywords, but it’s fine. (5)</font></font>
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    <font style=”vertical-align: inherit;”><font style=”vertical-align: inherit;”><font style=”vertical-align: inherit;”><font style=”vertical-align: inherit;”><font style=”vertical-align: inherit;”><font style=”vertical-align: inherit;”><font style=”vertical-align: inherit;”><font style=”vertical-align: inherit;”>You spoke at a natural pace and with clear diction. </font><font style=”vertical-align: inherit;”>You were also able to use the target vocabulary, such as discourse markers (eg “so”, “anyway”) and words related to types of groups (eg “office workers”, “family”, “multinational”). G</font><font style=”vertical-align: inherit;”>ood job! (5)</font></font>
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    <font style=”vertical-align: inherit;”><font style=”vertical-align: inherit;”>You were able to make use of the zero conditional correctly one time (eg “If we talk about ordinary activities, community members usually gather…”). </font><font style=”vertical-align: inherit;”>However, please be careful in making sure to use the simple present tense for this grammar point. </font><font style=”vertical-align: inherit;”>For example, one time you said “If they have disagreements…, they will always come to a consensus peacefully.”. </font><font style=”vertical-align: inherit;”>You could’ve just used simple present tense instead of future tense. (4)</font></font>

    A pretty splendid job overal! Keep up the good work!

    <font style=”vertical-align: inherit;”><font style=”vertical-align: inherit;”>Total (out of 20): 18
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