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  • Solomon Hernandez

    22.09.2022 at 13:14

    Hello Liliya! I’d like to leave you some feedback on your Block 3 final project presentation:

    Structure: Good work on your presentation. You covered a lot of the important points. You had a clear introduction. Your comparison between present schools and the ideal school was detailed. For your points improvement, please make sure to cite actual sources of studies related to the topic. Also, I think it would’ve been better to delve a little bit more into the subjects. (4)

    Visual Presentation: Your visual presentation was pleasing to look at and easy to follow most of the time. Some of the text did feel a bit too much though, like in slide 2. We don’t really need to have complete sentences. Try to stick to keywords and phrases. (4)

    Fluency and Vocabulary: You spoke at a natural pace and with clear enunciation most of the time. Be careful with the pronunciation of “techniques” though; it should be [tek-NEEKS]. You also used some of the vocabularies correctly, such as “broaden their minds” or “stick at it”. You could’ve used more of them though, like “teachers will engage with students” or “so students can get by” etc. Also, be careful with the use of “take the plunge”. Normally, we use that when there’s context or implications of uncertainty or riskiness. (4)

    Grammar: Great job using the grammar point. You used the future form correctly (e.g. “Classrooms will make…”, “Some teachers will be keeping”, “Teachers will be less busy”, etc.). Try to keep it varied by using other forms as well, such as “be going to”. (5)

    Keep up the good work overall! Looking forward to your future presentations.

    Total (out of 20): 17

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