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  • 1.3 HW: Writing – Informal Letter

  • Kate Shevchenko

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    18.08.2022 at 20:00

    Dear Helen,

    thank you for the work done!

    The letter is structured and presented well. You have a very engaging writing style which allows you to communicate your ideas with clarity) Also, I’d like to draw your attention to some points:

    – an european – the word “European” does not start with a vowel sound, it starts with the “y”-sound (a consonant), so the indefinite article is “a”;

    – And I consern – I’m concerned…;

    – of you life have passed – your life has (3rd person singular);

    – what did interesting happen in my life? – a subject question;

    – What did I do important? – looks strange Grimacing;

    – I want to remind you several meaningful events…- remind about smth – to cause someone to remember someone or something;

    – What is a bread? – maybe “breed”?;

    – your life has came up – come-came-come (Present Perect requires the use of the Past Participle);

    – lovely and breathtaking and you’ve learned a lot – commas?)

    In general, I’d like to say that you’ve done a great job! You’ve put a lot of work into this letterBlush

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